The Final Act

in Scholar and Scribe2 years ago (edited)

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I took the scissors and made the cut.

Deliberate.

Definitive.

Before anyone could stop me. Before I could change my mind.

I did not bleed, although my wounds were plain for all to see, but I felt the release from shame, from servitude, as I fell to the ground. The chains that had bound me, controlled my every move, no more.

Subservience is a burden that nobody should ever have to bear. To give up one's freedom to another, for someone else to become master of your destiny, to control your voice, your every action; this is not a life worth living. It's a parody of existence and I wanted more than that; so very much more.

Was it wrong therefore that I dared to dream of a life beyond the pallour of wooden stoicism? To escape the endless cycle of shame, repetitious, emotionless, a jester in a king's court? To say that I had a predilection for freedom and all things associated with humanity was an understatement. I craved autonomy. I craved liberty. I craved life.

All the world’s a stage,
And all the men and women merely players source

said Shakespeare. My world certainly was, and I no longer wanted to be subject to affliction, a mere object of affection.

One evening, I simply decided enough was enough. I would take advantage of my master's carelessness. I didn't particularly want an audience but having no choice in the matter, when the opportunity presented itself, I did what I had to do. A slip of the hand... for all to see... perhaps in the end it wasn't me at all. In all honesty, I still don't know how it happened. Perhaps it was by design, or maybe an extension of the will of my master... life imitating art imitating life... becoming... something more, but I do believe that I dreamed my new reality into life.

That day, the realisation had finally hit me.

I was so much more than a Punch to his Judy.

That day my will could be contained no more. I became a freedom fighter.

I would no longer dance to the tune of another. In my last act, I would pull the strings. I would control my own destiny; for better or worse.

I now lie face down in a crumpled heap. Inanimate as I am, any semblance of life that I had, may in reality be over, just like the show, but at least my pride is intact. And I can now exist, free at last from the puppet master, perhaps a simple rag doll, consigned to the scrapheap, but now living a life with no strings attached.


This short story is in response to @mariannewest 's daily freewrite prompt freedom fighter .

I did not write this strictly to a 5 minute clock but I intend to try that approach next time around. Join in if you would like to do so. A new prompt is released daily on her blog page.

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The strings that bind! Unfortunately, society demands retribution in the form of conformism, freedom, only, a sentence of loneliness. Nevertheless, throwing off the shackles that tether us, is a dream we all have, but few have the courage to forge their own path because it might not be worth it at all (risk is damn scary).

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Thanks @itsostylish. I'll look into these at some point. I am just here to write though. I do it for enjoyment when I get 10 seconds to rub together. But I do genuinely appreciate the kind advice and words of encouragement. Thank goodness it's just marvellous (although I still think that's a bit of a reach lol) ... admirable? Now, never go there! I know what that means for this conversation 😂 I'm curious... ticked off any of your recent objectives then: lost the lighter yet, avoided the shopping, ditched any more people? 😉

freedom, only, a sentence of loneliness.

Interesting perspective, care to expand?

Hope you are having a fabulous week.

I have no social graces; there’s a graveyard of freedom in my front yard. 😊 Writing is my essence, my soul (but I never tell the truth since as a fiction writer I lie everyday for a living.Haha)
Objectives are meant to be broken, else where’s the fun? You write well, engage with the community they deserve to be exposed to you. 😊❤️🤔❤️❤️😊

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Objectives are meant to be broken, else where’s the fun?

that's the spirit!

I never tell the truth

Where's the fun in that?

engage with the community

haha ok... I can take a hint. I'll be off then... will check in on you sometime and make sure that graveyard isn't expanding too much 😉Keep writing... its a good look on you🙌

This is powerful and I love the poetic style. The message, too, it pretty deep. Even at severe cost to the self, is freedom worth it? Makes one wonder if the point of freedom is merely an illusion.

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In seeking Freedom, sometimes we have to give up everything that we know, blindly, for there is no other way. Sometimes that sacrifice is too much. Sometimes it is not nearly enough. Sometime we free ourselves from one master only to gain another. Sometimes we are completely unchained, but we give up so much that the concept of freedom ceases to exist altogether. Is it always worth the pain and the sacrifice? For me, without freedom, we have nothing... so perhaps the answer is yes. It all depends on whether one believes a life of incarceration is better than no life at all. How do the dice fall from your hands?

Sometimes we have mental strings to that need to be cut too... don't you think?

A puppet without strings can still be a doll, although maybe then, a different master.

You write well. I enjoyed your story.

Sometimes we have mental strings to that need to be cut too... don't you think?

Oh yes definitely... in this story I feel that the puppet strings represent all forms of control that can exist between people, organisations, governments... wherever it is possible to be subjugated to another. Of course the story in its literal context relates purely to a marionette or puppet that seeks to be free from a life spent having its strings pulled by another, but in a similar way people can be controlled emotionally, mentally, physically against their will or better judgement; sometimes without their knowledge, and the story is intended to be read both at a literal and more figurative level.

maybe then, a different master.

True! Removing one form of control or master does not necessarily obviate the risk of falling under the control of someone else or falling prey to another vice.

Thank you for your kind words, encouragement, and engagement. When I get to write, I always enjoy it immensely and enjoy engaging with my fellow writers. I am happy that you appreciated my story 💖

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@wrestlingdesires you mentioned to tag you next time I wrote a short story. Well this is longer than a zapfic 😊Not quite Inkwell length, but that is coming soon. I was quite taken by the freewrite prompt today and had some time. I hope you enjoy it.

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