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RE: Humanity

in #knowledge6 years ago

This is really good! I like a lot of the points you bring up about humanity defined by creativity. I have a question about the first sentence though:

This opinion was conceived as a result of several days in which I only focused on thinking about human growth in several senses, both in terms of evolution, as Darwinians and is due to the impact that influence my thanks various series intruded with this topic.

I don't understand what you mean by the last part of the sentence. Do you mean "both in terms of evolution, and in the Darwinian sense, due to the impact of various influences on my thoughts" or something like that? I assume from the rest of your blog that you're a native Spanish speaker, but your English is mostly very good with just a couple of small errors. It was really just that one sentence that made me pause. Let me know if you want a little bit of help cleaning it up because I'd love to share this post with a group which discovers interesting posts. :)

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Hello, how nice that you like it, thanks for your comment and support with my post, I wanted to show the impact that caused my thoughts to expand through an amalgam of ideas and topics related to an evolutionary concept in various topics. And of course if you like to help me I would be really grateful, I appreciate it. uwu

Cool! Do you have Discord? If so, my username is malloryblythe#8139. If you add me I can send you a couple of suggestions for grammar :)

Thanks I did it : 3