Nihilistic Rainbow - Poem Contest #3 | My German (not so satirical) Poem

in #nihilisticrainbow7 years ago (edited)


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Sorry if you don't speak German. I decided to follow the tradition of my beloved german poets and to use my native tongue

My submission to the "Nihilistic Rainbow - satirical poem contest":


Dunkelheit vernebelt meinen Verstand,
ein Gott spricht zu mir in grauem Gewand.
Die Worte weiß, die Sprache schwarz,
die Absicht düster wie vom Gott Mars.

Er sagt die anderen sind das Problem.
Machen was sie wollen und was mir gehört,
das wollen sie nehmen.

Dann erscheint ein Messer in meiner Hand.
Erleuchtung werde ich finden wenn ich es nutze,
das Blut danach mit meiner Kleidung abputze
und mein Spiegelbild darin erblicke gespannt.

Erleuchtung brauche ich nicht,
Verdunklung ist mir im Sinn,
sie lässt mich vergessen wer ich in Wirklichkeit bin.
Das Messer fällt und ich laufe weiter weg vom Licht

Danke fürs Lesen. Nicht zu hart sein, dies ist mein erstes Gedicht seit über 10 Jahren.

Der contest von @sature :
https://steemit.com/nihilisticrainbow/@sature/nihilistic-rainbow-3-a-new-round-of-the-satirical-poem-contest

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