WHEN YOU FIND LOVE

in #poetry7 years ago

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At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet they say, the words keeps flowing through, the right kinds of words falls in line.
You enjoy every moment, you see the possibility in everything.
You gain strength to conquer the world

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When you find love
When you find happiness
When you find joy
Your visions becomes aligned and clearer
How did you get here, you begin to ponder, but why ponder for too long when every moment is to be treasured

The empty and lonely feelings, you could feel them no more.

The kind of happiness you feel it's not the type to be shared on a status update,
but the enduring one, the sweet one,
the quite happiness that has never been felt before and yet it feels as if it's always been inside, waiting to be found. Like a house that has been empty for years waiting for the light to be turned on.
Waiting to be a home

Ps: Just trying my hands on this one😁
Thanks for reading

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Love is the sweetest music understand by every souls and falling in love is the sweetest form of falling that can not harm you. Thanks for sharing... Lols

Thanks for reading and commenting as well.

Are you trying to yell us suntin 😁😁 it's okay carry go. Lolzz. Nice post dear @adejoke16

@thelovejunkie
Mummy, eerrrmmmm
I'm just playing with my keypad 😁😁😁
Thank you ma.

O yh...she's passing a coded message

My sister is in love

Oh baby! is SBD am in love with😁😍😍

Hahaha this is sweet and deep. Adejoke has been handled by the touch of love...and you have magically become a poet. Being in love is like coming home. Being in love is also like stepping into the river, everytime it is always new.

Hmmm Love Doctor.
I want to reserve my comment😁

Better talk.

Love is a beautiful thing

Very beautiful.

This seems to be coming straight from your heart...have you suddenly found love @adejoke16

@adejoke16 is already walking in the shadow of love

You are walking in shadow of SBD right 😁😁😁😁 @fadiji09

Yes but i need/have to walk in the reality of sbd!!!!

Yes you right ,, everyone becomes a poet at the touch of love ,, good write up

Thank you brother.

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet"

I think I can relate to that. My interest in writing poetry began when I tried to express my nascent feelings as a boy (I'm now a guy, lol)

I think the last stanza can use a bit of rework though.

In all, good stuff!

Oh really, I will work on the last stanza, thanks for the correction.

Thank you😁😁

Welcome to the league of poets

Thank you, my Poet Mentor.

I'm honored

Love! Love!! Love!!!
When you're truly in love, you can't hide it.

😁😁😁😁

Nice one...
Will love to know the inspiration of this poem, coz out of the abundant of the heart the mouth speaketh (I guess in this case, the hand typeth). Lol...... wink

Errrrmmm my dear you see, I was just practising on how to write poem, besides I'm loving myself more these days😁😁😁

Hmmm... matters of the HEART....

What happen to it madam ? 😁

This is coming straight from the heart. It's absolutely up to you if you meant it or not. Nice one

Oh really! Thank you so much..

hmmmmm @adejoke16 .....i did not know you were this good ohh, its a really nice piece....you can check mine out too https://steemit.com/poetry/@darkmayhem/last-night.....thanks

True love can't be hidden. I could deduce you were not only TOUCHED BY LOVE but also swimming in the ocean of love.

The love found gives you inspiration and as well makes you express yourself this way. A good one, I like it

Lol... Swimming in the ocean of love😁😁
Thanks darling, glad you liked it.