Covert (original poetry)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)


Your words are disguised in sarcastic lies,

Cut like a sandstorm while I close my eyes.

So guarded and defensive you can't see,

Your verbal assault leads others to flee.

I've weathered your storms and seen what's inside,

The empty hollow space you try to hide.

Self righteous shit and holier than thou,

It's all a fucking act, stand up and bow.

I'm weak for caring? Why do you need shields?

Why do you attack and let your rage build?

Like a fucking child that can't be told no,

No one can find out that it's all a show.

Weaving distractions, tragic illusions,

Disappearing acts amidst confusion.

Holding yourself hostage when all else fails,

Searching for pity when other's hearts swell.

I'm asking again why you call me weak,

When you hide behind every word you speak?

Don't need clairvoyance to see what's true,

Kindness never made me as weak as you.


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This is one of my favorites from you- love how you explore the disdain the apathetic feel for those of who care. You've made a shift here by exploring a different emotion than you usually do and it's freaking beautiful.

Starting to see pity and charity as much of the same thing, and once again I find that compassion is the happy middle ground. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it.

Very powerful, Clay.

I'm weak for caring? Why do you need shields?
I've often wondered the same. Well written.

Thanks Rose! <3

Dope rhyme! I enjoyed it. :)

Thanks bro, after reading some of your poetry I think we both relate to this particular issue.

What a beautiful poem. I do not usually read poetry, but this got me! Nicely done!

Thank you for checking it out! I'm glad you like it.

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Nice poetry. I love it.
Great work