To Myself 2.0 (original poetry reworked)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)


Okay dude, listen, you've seen your vision,

There's never failure in life or mission.

You know what you want, not hung up on who,

Why care what others say? You know what's true.

No one can know for you so please just chill,

Time and moneys fake, don't stress on the bill.

There's no giving up, you never learned when,

You never learned how, don't need that lesson.

We all deserve happiness and freewill,

If you're ever drowning you'll just grow gills.

Remember you know and found true purpose,

Spread love, compassion, the worlds not worthless.

You already know that it all works out,

Not dwelling on why, it causes self doubt.

That's not why you're here, on to better days,

Go and show this world there's another way.

Entitlement is fake, self loves legit,

Know that you're worth it and never forget.

Don't doubt your intentions and always know,

What you feel is what's real, so let it show.


This is a major overhaul of a previous work that you can check out HERE. Let me know which one you liked best.

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Timeloops. The ear of a you, but not you, for you, to you. Love it.

"Why care what others say? You know what's true" - I like it :)