Lack Of Attention

in #poetry7 years ago
  • We pass by the memories in the new light of tomorrow, we see small things while passing by the great mountains. First love and gentle words that blink in my body, I forgot a lot of beautiful works because I push my future. The transient moments and eternal goals of material illusion carry a new science of love messages.


  • Source - picsdownloadz.com/featured/top-18-fantasy-art-dream-girls-hd-wallpapers/

  • We are everything and we are nothing in the dust, a star that falls on the palms of great thoughts. The goals become fatigued and light, the weight comes with the boats of happiness. Your intentions have interest in winds of money, this is a new era of quick madness.

  • We fly on the wings of knowledge, new changes come, while our attention lives in the passion of tomorrow. I can not forget your character and romantic words, I can not forget your attention and touch in romantic nights. You are my lighthouse that gives me the memory of the most beautiful love.

  • Love is a butterfly in your hands, you smell like angels as you dress the smile of the sun.My attention is related to our love, we sail on the stars of the eternal youth of meditation. You are a painting on my graffiti that becomes eternal art -
    Love is love.


  • Source - art.alphacoders.com/arts/view/91565


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Nice poet and the pictures looks stunning!

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Thank you, have a nice day

Thank you for the post, I like your message. The lack of attention affects the psyche, I congratulate Valentine's Day.

Thak you very much

Give some little love
Save a soul
The time is now
Before you turn to dust

Give love a chance
Spread a little love
Heal the world

Heal the world

If love is madness may i never find sanity again!

Lovely poetry @dobartim

I love this line:

Love is a butterfly in your hands, you smell like angels as you dress the smile of the sun.

Your words hits hard, yet gentle in my heart!

Thank you very much

Lack of attention.
Wow... Thats a great topic for your presentation.
We pass everthing that we meet on our way.
Thats not a good sense of attention.
Nice post friend

Here you are back with a gem. The way you depict the sadness of being alone getting outlasted by the feelings you have for your beloved is mesmerising. Love will always amaze us in the best of ways, show us the path of happiness which we even cant dream off. It enthrals all our senses takes us in the imagination of being in the bewilderness of someones deep love and affection. Love is simply indescribable, your words will fall short but its feel is everlasting

Thank you for exellent comment

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Your description is very impressive about mountains. That's moment was really atractive and memorable. I feel that place reading your post.

Nice

keep up good work

Most people doesn't realize that the only thing you've got in your life is... NOW. So you better pay attention to it!

This is the point

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There is a deep truth in these kind of post.indeed giving attention to the most little details in our life is very essential.

Thank you for your kind comment

There is a deep truth in these kind of post.indeed giving attention to the most little details in our life is very essential.

great article

So we must be more sensitive to all situations and conditions, very inspiring postings

Your description of love is amazing and touching@ dobartim. Love is everything. The whole reason for human existence.

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Awww...such a beautiful and thoughtful poem. Well done @dobartim

Thank you very much

Very deep post.

Thank you for uploading it and making me reflect on my life :)

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Oh I love this. Thanks so much for sharing!

You are welcome

oww nicee....

great post
that's true lack of attention is the biggest issue in today's love life

Wow excellent

really the poem is very nice and touching the hearts of all people, I really like your poem. you are a motivation for me

touched.. You described this beautifully ... you are gifted

Hey man, thanks! I've been interested in poetry a long time but im new to steemit. I appreciate this piece. Happy Valentines day!

reading your words is very meditative - to the point where id even say it is embedded in your tone of writing. when i imagine a voice reading it, i imagine it calm, tranquil, soothing - such a refreshing experience.

when i write i am often inspired by frustration or sadness. my writing is the poem version of an Adele heartbreak ballad - and reading it has an effect of grasping for outlet of some sort. its a totally different vibe, so i really appreciate the refreshing fragility of your words! thanks for sharing, i look forward to reading more :)

This is so beautiful!.. Love is beautiful.. What a beautiful post! @dobartim I love it!

Love is a great inspiration. Really nice work you have here. Upvote

Cool piece. The picture adorns the write-up beautifully. Keep it up.

I'm inlove with your work, truly

True, love is love, nice poem, voted and followed!

Great one! Followed you for more! I am new here too and writing poetries and prose, hope you can read some of mine too! 😊

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It's amazing ,I like your posts very much.This time I read the text without checking the author,and than I noticed it is you again!!!
Good job!!!

Time has a role of showing us what matters in life

Nice job! Interesting word-painting and very evocative. Thank you for sharing this.

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