Wedding bells toll
Lips trembling; black jaw opened wide
Deafening silence tormenting my mind.
White veil. Ivory dress. Beautiful bride.
Now a black mesh, hands in chains. Confined
Rings. Binding us together in life. Death,
Seduced, by a name so sweetly dark.
Words ushered by a last innocent breath
Time passing, simmering an unlit spark.
Vows echoing a silent room concealed
‘I do’ but you don’t. Words that you promised
A coffin, your tomb to be unsealed.
All the lies, you were never honest.
A knife cutting the cake, cutting my rope
For all that has happened, I’ve lost my hope.
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Nice!
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Thank you :)
Some really powerful words, the imagery this peom creates is spectacular... keep it up!!!
Aw, Thank you very much!!