You and I
and very close to us
lay the corpse of the moments
fallen from the lap of time
some games you won
some I lost, some I won
and some of them we lost together
none of us is there
but the game goes on
It will keep going
till the moments
fallen from the lap of time
keep turning into the corpse.
He asked me" if I missed him"? I didn't answer and walked away keeping my eyes closed and shedding tears. May be u and I were not meant to be together.
I love your work and the way you pen down your emotions.I am happy to be a part of steemit as I get in touch with so many beautiful souls out here.keep up the good work.One day you will surpass all.God bless you with all the good things in life.
He asked her if you miss him and she generously crushed his emotions under her feet. she slapped his dignity for how dare he could express his feelings in front of her.
His answer was "Corpse of the Moments" but in fact, it now turned "Morgue of the Desires" He now wanders in the "Corpses Of the Memories".
Ohh!!!
Thank god she left.God will punish her with the same brutality.
Who does watt? who cares? How smiles turned into quenching and grinning?
This statement signified her carelessness towards him.
(Ohh!!!
Thank god she left. God will punish her with the same brutality.) It reveals the zero importance of that boy. It reflects that he really never mattered to her. She was just playing around.
May God bless her. That boy does not want any punishment for anyone. Neither he wants to avenge his crusader. For that matter, she is not the first one to ditch him. He had his experiences though, none played the game. For that matter, she is not the first one to ditch him. He had his experiences though, none played the game. But again he questions "Thank god she left". This signifies the attitude, ego and gives a damn approach toward the corpses. She killed not only him but his soul and his belief and now she doesn't give a Damn!!!!
She was a forgiver, she didn't know how to give up on people.
Now she hates herself for being so possessive. she herself allowed him to make holes in her heart.
She hates herself for not being able to bear this pain.
Above all she hates him for letting her walk away as if he never knew her.
Why u and I met?
She is again thinking of herself only. He would have never walked away silently if she had not threatened him of her losing self-respect.
How could he tolerate that she was thinking low about herself just because of him? He walked away carrying intolerable pain. He is walking alone now though, deep inside, he wants to be called.
He had been pushed by her words,"Don't ever try to message me" How can he be the reason for her pain?
Yeh jazbaat hain. Iske liye dil mei mohabbat honi chahiye. Saamne nahi aana kisi ki majboori bhi to ho sakti hai naa. Ho sakta hai ki kisi ki nafrat honthon pe aane ka darr ho!
Ab yeh sitam har kisi ke naseeb mei bhi nai hota naa!
Mujhe mila hai, mai khush hoon.
what a nice and love poet, i love the lines,
keep it up
Thanks buddy :) @mrblu
Very good one poem I liked very well Thank you Brother for giving this wonderful poem to us and this post I'm resteem now
Thanks buddy. I am really very happy to know that you liked it. Thanks once again for the resteem. :) @tipu77
Thanks, I'm also happy that you gave me a vote of 13 percent, though I'm very happy even though it's very rare as a Percent
Hello! This poem sounds like a song to me! But I would offer you another photo, it's too trivial, in my opinion ... Or without a photo, the poem is superb in itself.
waiting for the pic buddy :)
Beautifully written. A very poignant poem.
Thanks buddy @nehab :)
A very lovely poem. Resteem it cause it inspire :)
Thanks a lot @janellaqueen15 :)
Beautiful poem with thought provoking content which can take one back sometime in the past.
Thanks a lot bro @genuinegermaine
Just mind blowing poetry @honeychum.. it's touch my heart. ♥ Thanks for sharing.
Thanks mate! :) :) :) @faiyazmahmud
You are always welcome dear @honeychum
corpse of moments fallen from the lap of time...that's some creativity there...the poem is beautifully crafted...small but very effective...loved it. @honeychum
Thanks a lot mate! I am glad that you liked it. :) @fahad17
That was wonderful poem, one of a kind. I hope to read more in the near future. Keep up the good work.
Thanks buddy @ulgaranj :)
interesting poems and i like it
Thanks buddy. :)
What a beautiful poem it is! Touching and vivid! Love it:)!
Thanks mate! :) @hamadriada
Wow Really good poem @honeychum
Thanks a lot my dear friend :) @information7
its a beautiful poem, but kind of sentimental as well.
Yes, its my expression of my experiences. :) @moonprincess
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Great. Moment i seee in the picture