Changes with every mood—
Dark with anger
Pale with sadness
Although right now,
it’s blue;
So sleep safely, Love,
In watery moonlight,
I'm watching over you.
Blue-Faced Lover
Changes with every mood—
Dark with anger
Pale with sadness
Although right now,
it’s blue;
So sleep safely, Love,
In watery moonlight,
I'm watching over you.
Fantastic.i like this poem and upvoted.
thank you, @suchi
wow.!!
Thanks, @younushaw
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I like the way you makes use of nature images.
Your works are really unique.
Will get back to you soon on the poetry I want to analyze.
thanks mimy :)
Nice poem. Keep writing!
thanks
Your welcome :)
Hm. This is very sweet. Great post, i must say.
thank you, @ihuomastephen
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STOPFantastic.i like this poem and upvoted.
thanks, @ghoradim
Blue, the colour of melancholy, but with an almost primitive sense of being protective added to it. I like it.
yes, very true, arthur
Aww. This is sweet. Great painting to accompany it too. I think it refers to how external situations can sometimes be unpleasant, but the lover won't let that stop him from protecting his beloved. :) It's interesting how "blue" here basically means happy or pleasant, when otherwise it would refer to sadness. Nice! :D
this a very insightful response, and you're right. Thank you :)
this was a haunting melody, Bucky - my wife felt it brought to mind Scottish castles and mist, and I wasn't far off imagining myself in a drizzly kirk keeping a night watch. A beautiful piece of artistry
Thank you John and thank your wife for me :) I always appreciate your wonderful support and inspiration.
Don't think I ever imagined sky as sea before... Nice!
I have thought of space as a vast, vast sea.......
😄😇😄
well, I see clouds as a celestial beach and the rifts between them as lakes and oceans....sometimes the clouds transmute into breakers or in the case of mackerel clouds they resemble the markings on the side of a fish...but always the sea above me :)
You've given me some new eyes to lift to the skies... :D
I'm glad, my friend :)