Worldwide Cypher Jam (round 29) RAW RAP
6 years ago in #rap by positivity420 (52)
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nice work bro, could work on tightening up the flow a bit and enunciating your words a bit clearer. great content and vibe though. what's your mother toungue? might wanna rap in that :)
Thank you, I am not sure what do you mean about tightening up the flow :D Care to explain? :)
Yea definitely I am trying to work on enunciation a lot but I was talking with my upper lip down to hide that I don't have a tooth for the last 6-7 years... It's hard to get it back to normal when I am speaking xD Croatian is my mother tongue but I think most people won't really feel those lyrics :D
I'd love to hear you spit in Croatian man! I think rapping in English is overrated honestly, I try and mix it up sometimes with the bit of Malay and French I can speak.. About the tightening of the flow, mainly it's the way your syllables syncopate with the beat, now this could be due to the factors you mentioned above, but I often hear it with emcees who don't rap in their mother tongue.. get what I mean?
I think I get what you mean but I am not sure, is that when you like do a lil pause in the middle of the word when you rap? like the enunciating part of the word? I will mix a lil bit of Croatian in next sess :D I would love to hear you mix it up with French and Malay :D
You're so talented like Eminem! Wow!
Not sure anyone can beat him :D Although I will give it a go in a couple years :D Thank you
This is absolutely adorable! Lyrics are super positive and very nice 💚
Glad you liked it, thank you💚
Bravo, samo naprijed!!!
Hvala :)