Nice work @corina. Post itself has a great layout -- eye appealing. That makes such a big difference. Sort of a subconscious effect. Most people feel they are not good at writing. Because of that, they just write quickly and post. Failing to look back over their work. (The words "edit" and "editing" are REALLY scary for many.) You made it sound less threatening by suggesting reading it aloud. Great approach!

It's nice to find good, well-qualified writers here on Steemit. I'm still fairly new, but love what all I'm learning here.