Beautiful story! Some errors, some typos, but beautiful. I highlighted a few of the errors, might send it to the discord channel.
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Beautiful story! Some errors, some typos, but beautiful. I highlighted a few of the errors, might send it to the discord channel.
Ah yes, the errors such as "felled asleep" and "phone ranged". I was unable to get a discord account going on my Chromebook, but am looking for other writers and prospective editors. I'm quite the perfectionist, but after I've edited my work 50 times over, a fresh set of eyes can always find a typo or two. A rendundant adverb or an overused word. Alas, I can't get on Discord, but if you could contact me at [email protected] I'd love to colab.
Lol. Ya, you can't revise too much. Too bad you couldn't get discord, tho, lots of amazing servers with amazing writers on there. Id strongly suggest you get discord somehow--maybe the aoolication on mobile--I'll send you the server invite then.