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RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #3 - Post 1: Request for First Part of the Story

in #steemshorts7 years ago (edited)

Glad to join this contest, thank you!

Summary-Part I:

Be the best, Karma Comes in Different Ways

Reiy was a good girl, even a part of her friend was bullied, bluffing on her. but she always try to take a positive side.

One day, when she leg through the lobby, there's a group of girls react with annoying demeanour intended mean to make fun of her. But, she doesn't take seriously, she walk through politely ignoring the girls who always never stop mocked her.

Meanwhile reiy passed the lobby, In the mean time, suddenly the roof top lobby falling down over the group of girls which made them swallowed by the tragedy. Reiy was shocked and realized that the girls was vanished burried by the wreckage of roof, at that moment, she scream asking for help meanwhile there's a small sound called her name...

Reiy, Help me...

In hurry, reiy try to reach that girl and pull up to released her, but it was too late. the roof wreckage was too big, and the last sound weeping,

Forgive me! Reiy Forgive us

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Thank you for your valid summary

you're welcome and thanks so much to you @vclier