"Her smile is the last mile to heaven "original lyrics and a pencil sketch I made !! open invite for all singers

in #writing7 years ago

---------Your Smile Is the Last Mile To Heaven------------


Your smile is the last mile to heaven
you chuckle and I hear drums of heaven
I hold your hands and earth stops still
you dance like butterfly hugging a Daffodil

Your smile is the last mile to heaven
You chuckle and closer I get to drums of heaven

You smile ,in a clear night ,under the moon !
Your Incense, is mist of spring ,at the noon!!
You glow ,like stars in night,mischievous & bright !
I can feel, your Colors ,even in black and white!!

Your smile is the last mile to heaven
You chuckle and I hear drums of heaven

You rule the land and roam the water free !
your irreverence stands tall like oak tree !!
Green heart and hue of white fabric ,you dance with me!
Loved by all sailors ,you told everyone"He is the captain for me"!!

(Original lyrics by me)


It is also an open invite for all steemians to give it music and sing to it !!
last time it was done by @carlgnash and a mindblowing mix by @yusaymon(I hope they do it again) you can see his beautiful music collaborating with my Lyrics "Burning my love to ashes" on the link below do check it out

https://steemit.com/writing/@chapterclosed/burning-my-love-to-ashes-my-original-lyrics-and-a-song-coming-soon-by-carlgnash

And If you did not like the lyrics , here is a sketch that I made few days back (something for everyone)

Pencil on A4 sheet,

A friend of mine in Indian ethnic attire , 10462724_307751759384457_3565451678808819_n.jpg


Do give me a shout out by name Prafull kausik aka @Chapterclosed If you make a video I have 1K friends on facebook will definitely share your link in there,You can edit the lyrics as you like

If you like what you saw and read
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you are a good writer..

thank you !!

Smile with pleasant soul can make every step of us easy... Thanks for sharing such a nice thoughts... Beautiful pencil sketch!

thanks for stopping by @mamu77

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