ORIGINAL POEM
Tears can no longer fall from these eyes
Immune to hurt I must be
I see the anger, the disgust
Peering back at me consistently
Have you fallen so far from that tree
to be deemed different than loving?
The selfishness masked is unbecoming
All masks eventually develop cracks
Pools have been filled by past tears
Memories I no longer hold on to
Although daily I am reminded
that I'm vaguely a consolation prize
An ego to an egoless man
Distinctly sabbotages the good it can
During moments of joy and bliss
It teters above looking at what ifs
Part of the image above as well as dividers were from pixabay and are free to use
I hope you enjoyed my writing. I used to always write poems, all the time but have fallen out of it and are now just sometimes a more peaceful way for me to process feelings and such. I have begun to play with lyrics and such over the past few months so I do believe poems in a way can help me so I will try to write a bit more.
Thank you for reading, and as always...
Check out some of my other Poetry posts I have done in the past
| Speak to the heart - Love poetry (Original) | If I Forget (Original Poem) - About Alzheimer's & Dementia |
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That's a really beautiful and it really touched me. I love your poems and I'm glad you are posting again 😊 your Awsome and I use to do it to but many years ago.... Lol
Have the best day darling and thank you for yesterday I loooove talking to you 🤗😘
Love you my sister 💙💚💛💜
I loved talking to you too. Thanks for your words of sweetness. I am glad my words touched you, it is usually the goal with poems but sometimes I think I am the only one who benefits, when now I know that is not true.
I wish to join you guys and also post a poem that is fantastic like yours I so much love your posts
That was pretty. Like the pulls to break the thoughts too.
Thank you :)
Jenny this is so beautiful!
You should write more often ;)
Wow 😍😍😍👏👏👏
Aww thank you. Yes it is something I rarely do but should probably practice more again.
me encanto tu tan valioso poema
Thank you very much.
Muchas gracias. :)
Here's an upvote for a fellow poet. Really enjoyed reading your poem. I've also started posting my old poems too, so I feel like we're in the same boat there. Hope to read more of your work!
Thank you :) I am glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I definitely must write more but haven't as of late so sometimes it is nice to look at my older writing and share it.
There is so much emotion pouring from this poem, Jenny, I wonder sometimes, how big are our cups?
Many writers and poets talk about how deep our wells go, but I truly think you have asked questions beyond that in this piece here.
In its penchant moods for tragedy, the world can be difficult on us all sometimes, hope you've found much more joys in both the large and the small, and have asked your "what if?" of the past slightly less for now you know what we all in @thealliance know when we have the good fortune of interacting with @topkpop: the present cherishes you. <3
All the best.
What a fantastic comment! I have found much more joys in life for sure since that year that it was written. I really am thoroughly comforted and touched through and through by your wonderful comment. Fantastic. Thank you for taking the time :)
I always knew you had a way with words but not that you were so talented at poetry
Awww. That is so sweet. I think I have a far distance to go when it comes to poetry but thank you so much for the sweet compliment. hugs
Just the truth my friend 😎👍😎
That sounds really good, I have a friend who usually writes when she falls in love, feels happy or falls apart with her friend. It feels like probably it was such moment in your life that inspired you to express emotions. Thanks for such nice poem.
Emotions are certainly such wonderful things and can be the driving force for a lot of poetry that is written I am sure. Thank you for visiting and your wonderful comment :)