Mind... blown! This is amazing. You did a great job at grasping the readers attention and immersing them in this moment. Two thumbs up!
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Mind... blown! This is amazing. You did a great job at grasping the readers attention and immersing them in this moment. Two thumbs up!
Aww shucks, thanks! I’m glad it turned out okay. <3