Beauty In Me...

in #dsound7 years ago (edited)

This is another instrumental I've withheld from sharing, simply because I've felt it was incomplete without lyrics - and not the highest quality of my work.

Nonetheless, it's done little good sitting on my hard drive with no one listening to it.

Imperfect as it may be, it wasn't created to collect digital dust. And regardless of how it may have not lived up to my ideal for what it could have been, perhaps there's still something within it that may be of inspiration to some listener out there in the Steemitsphere.

Thus...



Listen to Rok Sivante's "Beauty In Me" on dSound




This one gnaws at the perfectionist in me.

Without question, it is still a work in progress - not only lacking a vocalist (who at one point, I envisioned as Katy Perry possible suiting it best), but really being demo-quality, not at all the final engineering job I'd felt it needed to truly bring the song to life.

Regardless.

I personally might not love it as much as others in the vault. Yet, that doesn't mean it's not good, or one of you listening to it might not care about the fine details setting off my OCD triggers and love it simply for what it is.

Granted, there was love poured into this, and it's something of an emotional journey.

So...

It's my hope that you'll find some enjoyment in this listening experience.

Bless.



Listen to Rok Sivante's "Beauty In Me" on dSound


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Nice job. Thanks for sharing the music.

Hey @jjcali just spreading the word that I’m always making music as well. I’m trying to expand the music community within the Steemit community. Let’s go all the way !!
Check out my song called identified dinero. 🔥🔥🔥🔥

I think it is AWESOME that you are making music. Your wide variety of creative ability never ceases to amaze me! This was also my first time listening to anything on dSound, and I gotta say, it's a pretty nice music platform. Never stop creating my man! You're an inspiration to people like me who want to find their creative spirit through whatever means necessary.

Peace :-)

Yo wasup @josiahthomas. Just letting you know I’m new hip hop Steemian here just pushing new sounds and creating new connections here on this dope platform. If your into new music check out my track called “Bout Dat” its so dope bro!
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life is real song then i hope every heart sing this song with love

Nice view of beach and sunset.
Actually this instrumental song was really good and peaceful. It's sounds cool to listen. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward your next post @rok-sivante

This is interesting, if you do dance, maybe you will become the second mickel jackson. 😊

I like your post ...
If you want to upvote my post too, it's not wrong if we help each other.

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wao this photo look very beauty with sea sky.

Hello, I just joined the DSound community. Can you support me? :)

It's amazing photos dear , beach I love that .
Sun is looking awesome .Thanks for sharing

Namaste

It sounds amazingly and harmonic, it's also cool to listen to, the title is even better

Adding to my daily meditation list drums go well with piano but don't hit to hard to shake the cool off of it. The beach gives it the harmony like a soft rock/symphony feel nice m8

"BEAUTY IN ME" even though to you it like incomplete but the instrumental sounds so great and cool enough listening too..
nice work

Hey, I do daily freestyle raps. If you'd like me to try one over one of your productions, let me know =]

Great work, followed! Thank you for this, and introducing me to dsound as well, this platform continues to amaze me.

The sky look so beautiful , i hope can fly in the sky with my girlfriend

I'd like to hear more of your work, @rok-sivante, as I share your estimation of this piece. I kept expecting it to go somewhere it didn't... As a fellow creative type, I'm a poet, I've learned to trust my judgement about a piece of art. If it feels incomplete, I might set it aside, until I'm ready to revisit it, or abandon it, altogether, in favor of creating new work.

All the best, Yahia Lababidi (Egyptian poet)

Hey man, that is some great advice there, for sure.

Goethe, I believe, worked on Faust for decades... picked it up and abandoned it... Rilke on his Elegies, also, for incredibly long. There's a reason both of these works are masterpieces and the men who produced them are perceived as immortal masters. We steal from ourselves when we pick fruit from our garden that has not yet ripened...

Thanks, for indulging me, @barrydutton. Here's an introduction to my work, if you're interested: https://www.pbs.org/newshour/arts/poetry/humble-one-liners-can-teach-us-times-live

Warmly, Yahia

nice. that first paragraph is gold.

THAT right there just would have earned my following, if I hadn't been following you already. 💗

You’re incredibly kind to say so, and I’m truly humbled by how graciously you have received my commentary on your art. Forgive me, for being somewhat clueless when it comes to technology - I shall make an effort to listen to more of your compositions on your station. To quote Goethe, once more, all art conspires to the condition of music.

Meanwhile, I hope my (mere) words might keep you good company - just posted a new poem, today :)

Sweet dreams, @rok-sivante

most all of what I've done is on my dSound page, mixed up between DJ promos, originals, and remixes...

t'is part of the creative process, sometimes - giving a work space to mature, time for different elements to come in upon revisits, and so forth... :-)

Aw man, that is nice.

I have been meaning to hit up some of your posts to listen to your stuff more but this last week, and all weekend is injury lawyer paperwork crap.

This week too.

It has destressed me now LOL.

Great work.

That quiet part just after the halfway mark - starting around 2:10 in -- is a sweet transition man.

SO much could be done with that part by a vocalist.

Do we start a petition now for Katy or...........

(:

Have a good end to your wkend man.

Very nice work. I have been meaning to send you some stuff to listen to, I think you will like a lot, of someone you really remind me of a whole lot, mind-wise and maybe even music wise.

Will do it soonish.

I thought it sounded pretty damn good. It had kind of a Phillip Phillips vibe to it.

Although, since you spent most of the post talking about how not-great it was, the whole time my brain kept straining to agree with you and looking for things that sucked about it.

A good rule for life- Never point out a negative. If you say your work is great, people will probably believe you. If you tell them it sucks, they will probably believe you.

lol. not a bad tip. :-)

Keep working my friend and wish you success always. Best Regards @rok-sivante.

It sounds good. It is calming; like a good soundtrack to an awesome movie as the credits roll by. I had to listen on repeat. I don't know why I can't log into dsound with my posting keys. Thank goodness you can listen to songs there without having to log in. I love instrumental as I could listen without distraction. Now I want to get this one on my list.

hmmm... maybe try a different web browser?

I don't know about logging in, but I've had trouble uploading with both Safari and Chrome - finally got working with Firefox. I dunno if the browser would make a difference logging in...

I use chrome but I just logged into Firefox and I was able to log in. I think there's a bug with Chrome users. Thanks for the update.

I listened to it. You've put a great deal of work into mixing those sounds. A good vocalist would do justice to the mix just like you've said. Great job.

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Sotthingg @rok-sivante sir the use of tje pianonkeys were too perfect.
Btw your last one "dj deep sunset" i have shared among my friends and they really like it. The starting beats were so terrrific that it makes us rumble inside the car😃

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I really liked it. Soothing instrumental and I think it does really well with out vocals!

Nice music. Keep it on.

the ocean view is very outside can, I like the same post

Nice track, kinda reminds me of the style that "explosions in the sky" have but a little bit harder.

Thanks for download link. I'll download and gonna listen this when I take shower.

Yo @rok-Sivante I’m a new hip hop steemian that just joined the platform. I just dropped some of my content on Dtube. If you have any advice on how to grow my audience in Steemit I would really appreciate it. I’m watching your moves and seeing if i can implement the things your doing as it looks like it’s work.
Thank you for your work bruh.

The photo very fits to this music, as listening it I imagined myself meditating on the beach in sunset... Wow, bro, you created really great peace. I think, I will listen it many times...

thank you. happy to hear it's been an inspiration. :-)

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How would you foresee that happening...?

Really enjoyed the track, Thank you.

I’m not a music lover,but if I am it is because I like but music and not the artist. Whoever sings it does not matter in the sense that it doesn’t have to be an A-lister, as long as the music and lyrics are great. However, an A-lister is chosen because of his or her reputation, and the composer believes that an A-lister has a greater chance of popularizing the song.
Having said that, some risks are worth taking. Remember authors of Harry Potter and Lord of the Ring!
There are talents to be discovered, that are outside of the box!

This is certainly a very beautiful song! Well done!

Amazing post! I loved it. Please follow me :3
Hello from Venezuela!

I picture Lana dey Rey's vocal on this in my head. I must say fam I love this