The Man in the Stetson Freewrite

in #freewrite7 years ago

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Sitting tall in the saddle, the lone rider scanned the horizon. He pull the battered old Stetson lower over his steely blue eyes. The young black stallion with the white blaze pawed at the hard ground, stirring up small dust clouds.

Jake reach for his canteen, and shook it before opening and peering inside. Not much water left. Perhaps enough for a swallow for him and a drink for his reliable steed.

Jake took a long swig of the tepid water and wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. He dismounted, filled his stetson with the remainder of the water offering it to Thunder.

They had a long journey in front of them and they would need water and shelter for the night. The sun blazed down. No breezes to cool them. Not a cloud in the sky.

Jake remounted Thunder and gave him a gentle nudge. Thunder knew the drill. This wasn’t his first rodeo and definitely not the first time that they had crossed this barren waste together.

Thunder could sense that Jake was anxious. He held the reins firmly, sat bullet straight in the saddle and seemed to be jack rabbit alert. He was expecting trouble. Thunder could smell it in the air.

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They needed to travel at least half a day more before they would come to their usual camping spot high in a rocky out cropping. There was a spring with cool running water, where Thunder could his fill and Jake could fill the canteens.

The sun was just setting across the top of the out crop as they stopped for the night. Jake unsaddled Thunder and turned him loose. Thunder was grateful for the long cool drink of water. Thunder quietly munched on a small patch of weeds growing close to the spring.

Jake took a deep drink of cool water and refilled the canteens. He pulled a piece of deer jerky from his saddle bag. No fire tonight. Don’t want to attract unwanted attention.

Jake surveyed the horizon from behind a large boulder. He couldn’t see much, but he could sense they were out there. They would be coming soon. He would have no choice but to have the shown down that he knew would come.

He drifted in and out of consciousness, dreaming of the girl in the red plaid dress with the white lace collar. It was cold and he pulled his deer skinned jacket tighter around him.

Thunder was nudging him with a cold wet nose. He been to the spring. Jake looked about him, trying to get his bearings. It had to be just after midnight. The barren landscape was washed in the pale light of the full moon.

Jake jumped up and went reached for his Winchester. He removed his Stetson and peered over the rock, squinting to get a better look. He could barely make out a large cloud of dust floating across the horizon. They were coming.

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Well written, your story writing is really good :)

Thank you!

love a good western story, nice post :)

I was totally there!!!! Loved this! Happy Sunday friend!

I am glad that you enjoyed it!

Awesome awesome story ceci! I really enjoyed it❤️❤️ I'm a cowgirl so it hits home

Thank you for you kind comment! I am so glad that you enjoyed it.

You left us hanging. But but... they are coming!

I love it! :D

Yup! I did! Thanks for reading it!

U have a great story description, i like it

Great piece ceci, I was intrigued, I could imagine and follow along you described the scene nicely. I had to look up what a Stetson was though LOL, now I know it’s a cowboy hat which makes sense haha. Look forward to the next piece.

Thank you. Sorry about the Stetson. I try to remember that folks here are from different parts of the world and may not have the same things that I am used to. A lot of times I have to asktoo what some things are because I am not familiar with them.

I love something like this
Thunder is really sensitive and strong

Thank you. Thunder is everything you would want your horse/best friend to be!

What a wonderful story my friend! I hope you are having a wonderful weekend! Thanks for sharing!

Glad you enjoyed it!

Good job. Seems just like the old western stories that I used to read years ago. You are bringing it back.

Francis

Thank you Francis, my friend.

woow so great 🐉💗🐉💗 i actually, wayyyy more prefear the horsey pic... stunning shoot🐉💗

Awww! Thanks, my Swedish friend. How you doing today? I'm a bit under the weather. Had really bad insulin reaction last night. My first one in 20 years. And the flu on top too. Going back to my little bed soon. :{

Your so Welcome dear💗💗🐲 Im fine, tnx👍🏻
Ohhh?? Get a tabelspoon of salt with sugar💗💗 that will help 💗💗💗💗 flue will mess insulie way bad ,,, 😩:((( keep the fluites and sugar coming , system will be ok, soon il promise💗💗💗💗💗💗 sorry your under the weather , i AM here for you any time!!! 🐲💗 of to bed ASAP missy < fix blankets and fluff pillow💗

Thanks so mush, my friend. See you later...:}

No biggy, i got you💗 of to bed nooooow missy!! Im not JOKING!!!
Later when your all ok🐲💗💗💗

OH no, they are coming. What's gonna happen? eep. Cool story.

Glad you liked it.

< was here🐉💗

But.. But... where do I hear the rest of the story!!

I plan on a second instalment but I am not sure when it will be finished. This week has been razy already and it's only Wednesday!

A tremendous short story @cecicastor Is there a second episode? I want to know who they are and why they are coming?????????

I am thinking about a second instalment. This was just a freewrite but I got caught up in the story myself...lol

Writing does that to you doesn't it @cecicastor Don't forget to tag me when you do the second instalment and in the meantime.......Have a great day my friend.

This is so rich in description! I felt as if I were there. Awesome job!

Thank you.

Love this story ..

It may be a short piece of writing, but you really paint a great picture in my mind. I hope you continue to write this story, I'm interested to see what happens next!

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