
We weren't looking for it and didn't see it coming; the tide is predictable, what happened to us was not.
A chance meeting, against the odds, a small but profound moment like the space between the incoming and outgoing tides in which everything changes. We were swept away in that moment by chance and it felt like falling but I was happy to fall with you, the fall was as beautiful as the sunrise.
It captivated me - whatever it actually was - you captivated me, and together we tumbled, entangled, falling together into a deep and boundless place...falling into love.
Chance played its hand and we took each others', allowed that chance moment to sweep away all that came before it ait carried us forward to what would come from it - who knew where, who cared - we were happy to be lost knowing we'd be lost together wherever the tide carried us.
We weathered unbidden storms and those we created, drifted aimless sometimes, but always with an outstretched hand so the other may find and grasp it, and we always managed to find each other, hold tight and face the storm. Together. We'd been swept away in a moment by chance, taken by the tide of love and no matter the storms we faced we overcame them, clung together, and found calmer waters. We were good at that, I remember you saying so; I thought we always would be.
Like the tide takes time to turn rock to sand, washing over them inexorably and unceasingly it can take time for love to rise. It comes like the rising tide, slowly and surely, washing over two people, washing them away like that chance moment did with us. Sometimes love comes like the relentless crashing of mighty waves pounding the shore...Sometimes.
But just as love surges, it wanes. Love comes and goes. Chance visited again, and in a moment I was swept away.
In the moment it takes to read a handful of words I was cast adrift, torn from you, taken by the tide of chance, washed up upon the lonely shore of a distant place like flotsam, alone and unwanted. We didn't do that together, you did it yourself.
There was no longer an outstretched hand to reach for, that hand reached for another, it was someone else's to hold.
The tide of love receded, no longer did it wash over us, no longer did we move together like the rhythmic and perpetual ebb and flow of the tide...*there was just the perpetuality of time moving without you and the sound of my heart beating alone and no longer in symphony with your own. It beat sorrowful and empty echoes of the heartbeats that were once yours, just echoes that the storm carried away when you left. My heart had come apart.
I couldn't breathe, I was drowning, or had already drowned, I cared not which. I couldn't catch my breath.
Chance.
I wondered is chance took you away as I drowned, if the same chance that had brought you to me also took you away.
It was by design though, a wilful decision - you'd been swept away from me and towards someone else by your own passions, necessities and for the sake of convenience...and you'd not cared enough to reach for me to connect, stand together, as we'd done so many times - you just looked forward and away from me, by your own choice, not chance.
As beautiful as the sunrise, I'd thought, as powerful and dependable as the tide and strong enough to endure, to take each moment we had together and weave it right into the next moving us closer together and towards the future we knew would come. As linked as the moon and tides, as constant as the rise and fall of the sun...I was wrong though, it was all a lie - and oceans stand between us, one tide ebbing and another rising.
[Fiction based on the word tide.]
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Beautiful fiction, very beautiful. Not only imagine the sea, the tides, the sun, the moon, the foam and the water in general... very beautiful moments came to my mind.
Reading you was like art, everyone interprets or feels by virtue of what they read and in this case for me it was wonderful.
I loved it! Don't stop writing!
Thank you very much!😀
This is something that's been rolling around in my noggin for a week or more; I figured I'd better let it out.
Thanks for your comments, I appreciate it.
It's beautiful, keep going!
It feels so real, must be true. That is why your fiction is so readable and easy to believe it.
Add the beauty of the image and I just know you have been there. Or not. Your imagination is vivid.
I love how you live your moments. even the ones in your head.
The tides of life, always moving.
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Hi Swigs, thanks for your nice comment. Unwanted to bring the reader there into the moment and figured some may relate through their own experiences; life doesn't always go to plan and neither does live after all. I'm glad it came out ok and you liked it.
Life's tide huh? One minute we're surfing along on the crest of a wave and the next washed up like detritus on far away beach.
Well I got swept away in your story.
Wishing I one day get the opportunity to experience love like that.
And then it is taken away, just like the tide.
Beautifully written, the love, the pain. You captured it all so well. Xxx
Hello and thanks you, I am glad you liked it. I've not written something like this for a while and in the last couple weeks it's been tumbling around inside so I thought I'd better let it fly. I appreciate your nice comment. It's nice to get favourable comments about creative writing.
The Australian version of Emerson right here. Cool stuff dude! I love the creative nature of these short types of things.
It's always a challenge to keep creative writing short but tell the story effectively, I tried here. The original was a little longer but I cut it down.
Tides, oceans in between, mirages... That feeling of drowning so pleasurable when you love without measure. Nothing is a lie when it has been designed in our mind.
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Yes, fiction. It aligns with life though, all fiction, as a human writes it.
Wow, you really sucked me in on this one. It reminds me of one of those classic stories from the authors back in the day, like Hemingway or one of those cats. It got me in the feels a little too.
Hope you had a great weekend.
I'm glad you felt something mate, that was the plan I guess. We all go through moments like this, either directly or indirectly as part of someone else's process and rather than shy away from them I guess all we can do is move through them and the suffering they can bring. The great part of being human is that we can rise from adversity and look back on it as experience to learn from.
All good here mate, a challenging weekend, but that's ok, I rose above it, mostly. I hope you're well also.
I agree. Moments like that suck at the time, but make us wiser and stronger for the future engagements.
Shit, well, glad you got through it and are able to start a new week ready to kick ass. Yes, I am actually doing great for the first time in a while.
I can say one thing that you are a very creative person.
You made a wonderful write-up on just a single word. I am amazed 👏 😍
Thanks, it was a nice process to go through and I'm happy the end result is satisfactory.
I'm glad to hear that.
Are you a writer also?
I mean, do you publish your writings?
There's a few things out there with my name on them, not anything anyone here on Hive is likely to read though.
Oh, okie 👍.
Best wishes.
wow what a beautiful sight i was satisfied to see🥰🥰😍😍
Yeah, it is I suppose, that's why I tooknthe photo.
I like your sunset photos
Cool.
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