It's not the sun or moon

in Freewriterslast year

I see a lantern that lights up a dark room

I feel hopeful even in the midst of chaos, I feel there's direction even in the midst of darkness.

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The night is nigh
Wrap up they say
They mock and scorn
Laughing, you came too late

Stucked with no one to turn to
Toil you must, and will
Yes you came in late
Still your grind you face

Little by little
You gather your pieces
It's dark, but journey you must
Your light it leads the way

It's not the sun or moon
It's just your light to lead
Night or day you'll shine
Your light, it lights the dark.

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nigh is night?
"Still your grind..." should be "you grind"?

I understand the essence of this poem although I think something is missing. It's not bad at all.

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Thank you, for the review.
I do take it into consideration