Will engage more today, been asleep and off screen these last 12 odd hours and won't be on much til later this arvo.

I hoped I nailed the action okay! It was fun to write. I love how you can have a character doing nothing but lying there having code fed to her yet still there's something dramatic happening! I wanted to convey that sense of movement toward the sinkhole and the teetering dizziness she felt as she changed from nanny to war machine. Thanks!