This is an interesting interpretation of the prompt. The man was able to heal himself (with magical intervention) by using his own internal resources. The symbol of the bird is nice. You maintain voice and avoid author intrusion.
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Yes, the bird is a symbol of freedom and healing in my story.
Sure, I'll comment on other writer's stories.
I commented on two stories
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