The Thousand Year Inn

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I rinsed the last bowl and placed it on the rack. Wiping my brow with the napkin I kept tucked in my apron, I muttered to myself. “All in a day’s work.”

I looked around the kitchen with its stone walls and high ceilings and smiled to myself. Even though everything in the kitchen was pretty much state of the art, I liked the fact that this particular room in the house was kept just the way it was. And I was sure that if I calmly perceived the air, that nostalgic smell of fresh pine leaves and the evening rain would still linger.

I halted my reverie when I heard a knock on the door. Who would be knocking at this time? Hadn’t I put the “closed sign” out? As I approached the door, the silhouette of the person behind it became familiar. I stifled a groan and opened the large brass door. A little.

“What’s the matter, Mart?”

Martin smiled and gazed down beatifically at my 5’3 frame. All six foot four of him. “How do you do, Lisa?”

“Quite alright. Tidying up,” I paused a bit for effect. “As I usually do, every day at this hour since you met me.”

He chuckled. That deep throaty chuckle of his that I found incredibly masculine. And maybe sexy?

Focus, Lisa I chided myself.

Fixing a defensive scowl on my face, I turned back to Martin. “I’m busy, Mart. State your business and allow me return to mine.”

He still smiled at me, as if he found my scowl amusing. “No need to be grouchy, Lisa. Was just checking up on you is all.”

My face was dubious. “That’s all?”

His voice went a notch lower. “And maybe I was hoping you’d invite me in for coffee?”

His face was so adorable as he said it, I couldn’t help laughing myself. I didn’t know what to do with this man. “Be for real, Mart. I’ve told you I’m not interested.”

“But why not, Lisa?” His head dipped and his mouth grew into a pout. Which was ridiculous for someone who was nearly the length of my brass door. I stifled the urge to laugh again.

“I just don’t need a relationship right now, Mart. Try to see it with me.”

“But I don’t even need that. We could be friends.”
Could’ve fooled me. “You know we can’t be friends, Mart. I find you way too attractive for that.”

That got him grinning so hard, I thought his face would split. “Then why are you pushing me away, Lisa? I’d be an amazing man to you.”

Did he think I didn't know that?

“I know but....” I didn’t get to finish my sentence because I felt something tingling in my pocket. It was my pocket watch. I was always conscious of it. How had I been so careless?

I looked at Mart whose brows were already creased in confusion. “Is everything okay, Lisa?”

I gave him a tight smile that I hoped didn’t betray the trepidation I felt inside. “Of course, Mart. But why don’t we finish that conversation, later.”

“But, Lisa-”

“That’s enough!” l yelled. At his broken expression, I added more softly. “Let us talk later, Mart.” His shoulders didn't need to slouch for me to know I’d hurt him extremely. Ignoring his broken expression, I shut my door and hurriedly moved back to the kitchen to round up my tidying.

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Just before the stroke of eleven, I felt without even seeing, the moon rise up and slowly, I walked up the stairs, past the beautiful rooms to the last floor of my three-storeyed mansion. I felt my fingers shake and the pain in my knees grow before I opened the door to the last room of the mansion. Taking a deep breath, I pushed it open and smiled sadly when Cassie ran to nozzle my ankles. My companion in this thousand-year curse.

I sat at my table of woe and felt the tears that would have fallen on my cheek a lifetime ago, still in my eyes. What wouldn’t I give to have someone as amazing as Mart beside me? But he wouldn’t understand the curse over my head, which meant that every night from eleven to six am, my frail, papery skin, was revealed. Why would he stay when a hundred others had left? Who would want to be with a woman who was secretly a thousand years old?

I held my cheek and looked at Cassie, her whines of woe a sad melody in my ears. But maybe if he waited seven years more....just seven. I shook my head and squelched that childish hope. No good man would wait that long. I felt the full moon rise to its peak in the sky and let the tears fall then. Just maybe. A woman could only hope.

What I See

I see a woman surrounded by petals of roses, staring through her window. Dog and owner wearing a forlorn look.

What I Feel

I feel strong emotions hanging in the air like a sickly sweet perfume. Sadness, longing, but most of all....hopelessness.

Jhymi🖤


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What a beautiful story of hope and sadness. A thousand year curse. I love how you weaved the clock into the scenario so as not to allow Lisa to overrun her time. Many lifetimes lived in between night and day. I feel on one hand that Lisa was right to reject him and not pull him into a situation he wouldn't understand.

But then perhaps if he loved her, could he endure only days of being together until the seven years had come? It seems as if she wasn't willing to take the chance of rejection is she proposed such an arrangement.

What an awesome story. Lovely read. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
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I love how well you're resonating with the story. And yeah, I didn't feel it was right for her to willingly accept his love when she had no clue of whether he'd understand her situation or not. I do hope for a happy ending for her though.

Happy you enjoyed the story, dear friend. Have a beautiful weekend.🥰

I think Lisa should have taken her chances with him... I hate what ifs

People reason "what ifs" and caution themselves to protect from the hurt they feel may result from it. Sometimes the rejection of one's offer is more painful, especially since in this story, the young lady has been refused several times in the thousand years.

The situtaion could have gone both ways. I just feel she didn't want to chance it with someone she truly had feelings for and be refused once she explained. Her reasoning...asking someone to wait 7 more years without being able to be a 100% spouse both day and night would probably be shocking to the average man.

Chances...one should always consider them. But some shyly stay in their comfort zone for fear of rejection. It happens in everyday life today.

Thanks so much for your thoughts and engagement. I appreciate it. Take care.

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A very valid point 🙂

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Beautifully scripted I didn't want it to end 😭... You are such an amazing writer ❤️

Oh, you flatter me so much. I'm happy you love it. Thank you.🥰❤️

You are welcome 🙂

A Cinderella story or 'shrek's Fiona' 😍

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Yes, I understand. And I've engaged as well. Thank you for the opportunity.🥰

This is an amazing script bothering on Lisa's hopelessness as yet again, another man, this time around, Mart comes knocking with a bouquet of love which unknown to him was a struggle of pains and hurts by the woman he desired.

Death perhaps may be a blessing as against the curse of constant oblivion and hopelessness.

Good script dear friend

Well, I certainly hope no one gets to die. I think they both deserve happiness, Mart and Lisa and there's hope that maybe, they both would get it.
Glad you enjoyed this, James. Thank you for the heartfelt comment.🌺

You're most welcome

Lisa is under a curse that won't let her live or die, a curse that denied her the love of many down the years. It's saddening to say the least but I do hope the seven years left, comes in a hurry.
You are an adept in story weaving.

She's been that way for a thousand years. 993 years to be precise. Hopefully, in seven years, she'll be free to be who she wants and love who she wants.🌺
Thank you so much for reading.

I don't know what to say. I think I have one kind of weakness about what to comment? I think I need to develop in this case.
The one thing I can say that your storytelling is quite powerful and I enjoyed it.
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Well it's enough words for me that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading.🌺

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Thank you.💚

That indeed was a nice story dear friend. A rather touching one when she could not accept the love of her man.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.🌺

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